His To Possess (#1-6) by Opal Carew - #review

His to Possess (His to Possess #1-6)

by Opal Carew (Goodreads Author)

Jessica’s life was in ruins…until she met him.

Standing in the rain feeling lost in a new city, with no job and no prospects, she’s about to give up. Until Dane Rainier pulls up in his limo and offers her a ride—and sweeps her into the life of her dreams. Now she has a high-powered job and is having the best sex of her life, exploring her submissive side under the masterful hand of a gorgeous billionaire.

But there’s a part of her that’s still holding back. Because the truth is, she’s never gotten over her ex-boyfriend Storm. A heavily muscled, motorcycle-riding rock musician, Storm couldn’t be any more different from Dane… and she just can’t get him out of her head.

Now Storm is about to reappear and turn her whole world upside down. Both Dane and Storm make her body burn to be possessed, but will her indecisive heart cost her the love of both men?

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Source: eARC for Honest Review from St. Martin's Griffin via NetGalley
Genre: BDSM Erotica

My Review...

This books had elements that I usually like in a BDSM Erotica but this book for me didn't quite cut it.

What it did have was:

1. A dominant
2. A submissive
3. A billionaire
4. A tattooed bad boy
5. Predictability

She never would have though she'd be okay being ordered around by a man, but it had been a major turn-on.

What it didn't have was:

1. Depth
2. Connection
3. True Dom/Sub relationship
4. Chemistry

With this book I felt the relationships very shallow and not believable. I also found the dom/sub part more on the corny side.  The dialogue with the dom/sub stuff felt awkward and forced.  The emotions didn't feel real and very wishy washy.  It was a love triangle but I didn't quite feel the tension like other love triangles.  I wanted to like it as I have liked writing from Opal Carew in the past but this series just didn't pass the mustard for me.

2 Not possessed thumbs up!
 
Lauren